The Special Eye

Eyes that sparkle,

smile that kills.

Devil of hell,

while an angel within.

You are a bit crazy,

but adorably sweet.

You are that person,

I could hardly resist.

Have you not wondered,

what makes me go so steep.

You had me falling,

since the very day we meet.

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  1. Some unexpected adjectives for adverbs here. (“Go so steep” had me thinking). You had me until the typo (or tense error) in the last line, which was jarring. “Since the very day we meet” confuses me linguistically. “Since the very day we met” makes more sense, but perhaps you wanted us to pause and think there? Hmm.

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